Welcome

Here's a quick haiku
To introduce me to you.
Do you like the view?

Okay, yeah, I know that was lame. but hey, a rhyming haiku on the spot isn't bad is it? So, welcome to my blog! This will mostly be used to get some interest and feedback on my writing that I've been doing in hopes that by the time I finish my books will be better than if I hadn't done this. I would appreciate comments with your opinions, what you like and don't like, etc.

---Thank you to those who have visited my blog! Deepest apologies for not updating as often as I intended to, I am working on fixing that. Thank you for your time and support, it mean's an incredible amount to me! *Please do have any friends and family you have that may enjoy some of what I write check it out and vote on the poll!!!*---

**Be sure to check the bottom of the page for information and a link about my novel Reversing Retribution which will be made into a movie by Mystic Arts Entertainment**

Thank you everyone for visiting, and hopefully reading so long as your here. Let's hope I don't fall out of my daily writing again any time soon!!!

Monday, September 12, 2011

Twisted Trust

I wrote this poem roughly half a year ago. The next poem I post will be happy one (already written) :)

Despair is what I’ve come to know

From a life of trying to rise from below

The climb seems impossible alone,
So I reach for a hand with a smile shown,
Only to be let go and take a fall,
Hurting more each time, I stall
Before I trust another smile,
Which in itself seems a sin perfectly vile.

Tuesday, August 23, 2011

Darkness of Heart (Pt 4)


Despite Rukioh's snoring, Lesion did manage to get at least twenty or so minutes of sleep after they moved the bodies. Lesion groaned and stood up, glaring at Rukioh, who looked as though he'd been knocked out. Except for the incessant snoring.
He walked over and prodded Rukioh. He waited a moment, then shook Rukioh vigorously. Rukioh woke with a start.
“Wha'?” He bolted upright, looking around frantically. He stopped and blinked a few times, his eyes settling on Lesion, who stood there with an obvious smirk.
“Ugh.. can it. Let's go.”
“In a few minutes. We've got time, the sun is rising, and I always do better when I have clear mind.” Lesion sat down next to his brother. They gazed at the rising sun, basking in its beauty and warmth. Minutes passed while the brother's were lost in their relaxed state, the brutal fight of the night blissfully out of their minds.
They came to at the fanfare, which was initiated at the arrival of Emperor Narix. They shouted at each other as they grabbed their belongings and hurried over to the coliseum. When they got to the entrance, both guards immediately recognized them, though one of them looked down and grumbled a bit while the other one gestured for them to hurry inside.
In a short moment they arrived at the waiting room, where they were greeted by Little Baldy.
“Hmph. You missed the opening ceremony, and the initiating of the games. You have about an hour until your duel.” He looked over at Rukioh and frowned. “To the stands with you!” he shouted, shooing him away with his hands. Rukioh turned and jogged away, saying, “Just make it back to me in one functional piece Lesion.”
Lesion gave a curt nod while Rukioh's head was still turned toward him. Lesion spent the next fourty minutes stretching, making sure all of his muscles were ready for anything his opponent could throw at him. The next fifteen minutes he used to get dressed properly for the battle. One thing he was grateful for was that in the death bout, no helmets, chainmail, or any heavy armor at all was allowed, so as to make sure that battles would be bloody. Also, this meant that he had an advantage over any fighter that was used to such armor, like a knight or guard.
Unfortunately for him, his only armor was custom made, being made of an uncommon substance called Celarium. It was very light, yet extremely durable. Luckily for him, he didn't have to pay for the magnificent armor with money, seeing as there was no way he could pull that off. Instead, he had to do the blacksmith a rather large favor.      He had to convince a very specific nobelman's daughter to court him.  Lesion payed the nobleman to have his daughter do so, saying that blacksmith was his cousin, and desperately needed to spend some time with a good girl. He continued on, saying that it didn't need to be a real courting, but it just need to feel that way to his 'cousin'. He then gave the blacksmith the good news, collected the armor, and left town immediately, never to be seen there again.
Lesion donned the light gladiator armor in disgust. It was filthy, the color of the metal changed permanently from being soaked in too much blood, and it had obvious areas where it was repaired, poorly. At least he could use his own weapons. They were called slip-blades, and were made of Wyxite, which was a very rare substance, which he didn't know much about. Each was custom fit to its specified hand, seeing as if they didn't fit properly, they'd be next to useless. The blades curved a little, were thin, and kept keen. The blades were designed to 'slip' between the ribs and slice the lungs, heart, or whatever was in the way. However, despite being thin, they were magnificently strong.
The boom of the drums signaled the end of a duel, which meant that he was up. He pulled out his slip-blades from there sheaths, and walked over to the gate, where he would enter the arena. The gate opened slowly, and he stepped onto the sand.

(I apologize for taking such a long time to post more. I've written quite a bit so I'll try and do a post from one of my books every other week. Please be sure to comment, leave tips/advice, say what you liked, loved, hated, etc. Thank you for reading!)

Sunday, March 13, 2011

Devil’s Guise (Poem)

A Shadow cloaked in light;

He is the bringer of blight,
To the souls of mankind,
To make them their teeth grind.
Whilst they cling to their Hope,
As it drops round their neck as rope.

Tuesday, February 22, 2011

A new poem (NOT written by me)

---I think this a great poem, and while I did not write it, I was asked to post it on my blog. I now do so happily, as I think my blog could use a bit more cheer :)---


Choose to Be Virtuous.
By J.D.S.



The first few breaths of life, an empty slate;
With each passing move, step, word: celebrate.
There’s so much to learn, and so much to do,
So much to seek out: discovering virtue.
The choices of others can weigh on our minds;
Those full of virtue, more happiness finds.
The shallows of life are easy to tread,
For those who choose to be carnal instead.
Let us strengthen ourselves, body and mind!
Go forth with courage: leave weakness behind.

Wednesday, February 2, 2011

Poem: A Look In the Hall of Life


Soul lies ripped and torn, to get up just to say ‘I’m fine.’
Patience, frail and thin, foot tapping, waiting for a sign.
Hope’s gaze slowly drops down, unable to see the sun shine,
And with a tortured, lie of smile picks up a nearby dime.
 
Perseverance continues ahead, on the floor in a crawl,
Where precious few see that effort, for they’re too tall.
And ragged loneliness leans, restlessly, against the wall,
In this ever twisting hall of life, where every step can be a fall.



It's different from my usual poetry, so please let me know what you think.

Thank you,

Jake Smiley

Monday, January 24, 2011

Poem: Flames of Heart


FLAMES OF HEART


Searing, agonizing, licking painfully between each beat,
explaining, expressing this kind of pain is not an easy feat.
Set aflame and tossed into the depthless dark,
Still the flames make sure to leave their mark.

The flames, with the pain, make a wavy light,
I almost wonder "I deserve this, right?"
With the flames I always know where my heart does lie,
Even when as I wait for endless tears to dry.

I know what I am, I know my own heart,
My heart has no need to restart.
Bring the flames, leave me in the dark,
My heart will shine brightly as it leaves its mark!

Wednesday, January 19, 2011

Reversing Retribution Pt. 4 is here!


--NOTE: from here, it gets a little more graphic, though I'll be editing the occasional language on the blog--

Aidan’s eyes were starting to adjust to the darkness.  Instead of nothing, he could see dim, vague outlines of his surroundings.  Aidan stood perfectly still, his breathing halted as he listened for the sound of breathing.  He wasn’t disappointed.  It was very soft and shallow, but audible to Aidan’s sharp ears.
The twisted monster was just to the left of the doorway, waiting to attack.  Aidan took a silent breath, switching the knife to his left hand the pot to his right, and quietly set the duct tape on the floor.
Then he took a quick step in, already holding the knife to block an attack to the face or neck.  The man was already sending his fist at Aidan’s face before he realized he’d be hitting a sharp knife.  The knife cut deep between his knuckles.  As he recoiled, clutching his hand, Aidan swung the pan hard into the man’s head, knocking him out instantly and down to the floor.
            Aidan tossed the bloody knife and the pan to the back of the room as he turned to get the duct tape he’d left at the doorway.  Aidan quickly taped him securely to the wooden chair in the back of the room, finishing by taping his mouth shut.
            He stood just in front of the chair, waiting for consciousness to return to the inhuman murderer.  No doubt he’ll be nothing but the picture of repentance and remorse when he’s awake.  Nothing makes a person fill with regret as much as death, because of the permanency of it, and the mystery of what’s beyond it.
            In a short while the thing in the chair started moving a small amount and its eyes slowly started opening.  Aidan’s eyes narrowed as his hands subconsciously formed into fists.  Once it seemed to fully awake, he smashed his jaw with a left hook.  There was little reaction, to which Aidan ripped off the tape suddenly.
            The hell spawn spat out blood along with a tooth, and just as it started to open its mouth to speak – no, to beg – Aidan’s right fist connected with it’s stomach, and it spat out a little more blood.  When Aidan punched the damned man full in the face, with a satisfying crunch as his hand crushed his nose, the chair fell over backwards.
            Aidan’s mind blanked out, and when it returned, there was singinificantly more blood on him and over the floor, but the ------ was definitely still alive and kicking.  Aidan’s eyes widened as his brain registered the mess in front him.
            What the hell am I doing?  Am I really… am I really about to take yet another human life?  Aidan collapsed to the floor as memories he’d thought erased slowly seeped into his mind.




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